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Max and Melody disguise themselves as Max's father to sneak into a PTA meeting to intercept a bad report that Max is doing poorly in class. Melody is suffering from a slight cold and has been sneezing her head off ever since. The medicine she took dose maker her sneeze less, but it dose not completely prevent them.
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I'm not trying to nitpick at your artwork, nor am I trying to be a pain in the ***, but I was thinking, for one, that you would've drawn the Max/Melody sequel the same way as the original. Also, I don't know if it was a misunderstanding, or if you decided to draw it how you wanted or what it was, but in both the original AND the sequel, you didn't draw Max or Melody building up to a sneeze, and then in the NEXT page, have the sneeze stopped just in time. You just have someone already drawn, stopping the sneeze in both stories, though I liked how you drew the finger under Max's nose in the first story. FYI, you never DID make an ending for the first story.